Hi Jaelyn, Nice work on your bio poem. I like how you say you give laughter to your friends. In my class we have done bio poems and I would like to be an artist too. Next time you could add spaces after your commas. I said that because there is barely anything else to help with. Great post!
Hi Jaelyn, I like your bio poem and I like the way you describe about yourself. Maybe next time you shouldn't put a big letter after the comma, you can just put a big letter after the comma if it's People's name or I. But, well done you did an amazing job.
Hi Jaelyn, Nice work on your bio poem. I like how you say you give laughter to your friends. In my class we have done bio poems and I would like to be an artist too. Next time you could add spaces after your commas. I said that because there is barely anything else to help with. Great post!
ReplyDeleteHi Jaelyn, I like your bio poem and I like the way you describe about yourself. Maybe next time you shouldn't put a big letter after the comma, you can just put a big letter after the comma if it's People's name or I. But, well done you did an amazing job.
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